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70. Bitter Silence

To someone staring at these two seemingly carefree teens from behind, the conversation seemed to be incredibly one sided. The one who was talking had light brown hair, green eyes, and stood at an average height. He wore simple jeans, shirt, and running shoes.

"I'm just saying..." the young coward known as Edda explained, "It could have happened to anyone! And I'm paying you back for it, aren't I?"

There was silence for a couple minutes, as the shorter, dark haired young teen stared towards Edda.

"Come on Paul..." Edda sighed, looking distraught. "We've known each other since we were in diapers...I'm sorry, okay?"

Paul shook his head silently, more silence. Paul appeared to be of Asian descent, but of which kind was not known by him. He was adopted, by a nice couple who had ancestors from France, by the last name of Lie, pronounced as one would 'lay.'

"...What if I got you the advanced version instead?" Edda said after a couple minutes, hands behind his head, glancing at his friend.

Paul stopped in his walking, then smiled, turning to Edda.

His hands moved fluidly, swiftly, making signs and symbols many outside observers would be unable to discern.

"Alright Edda..." the mute signed, "I'll start speaking to you again. You'll be forgiven for breaking my X-Box..."

"Deal!" Edda chuckled, "See, friends do good things for each other."

"Nice try, but you still have to get me the better version."

"Ah man..."
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Author's Comments

I probably could have done something more angsty for this...But I wanted something silly.

And you see a character of mine here I haven't shown off before!

Those on the SRB may know a bit of Edda. He's a coward, and never very exceptional at anything, but running away.

Edda is usually always accompanied by some sort of fire based thing called Sol. In the stories that Edda will be in, this is also true, but not in this short story.

Now, Paul here, as explained in the story, is adopted, and a mute. Edda and Paul have known each other practically all their lives. Because of this, Edda knows sign language. Well, American Sign Language.

Paul, however, has a power that is revealed later...And I think it's a fitting one.

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Sign language! That so cool! :D Lulz, I can say ';platypus' and 'I will kill you fool', but that's about it. XD

Awesome!

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"It is not worth an intelligent man's time to be in the majority. By definition, there are enough people to do that."
-G. H. Hardy
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I can't say anything in sign language, unfortunately. I'd love to learn it though.

Thank you!

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"Johnny Bravo...The only kids cartoon focusing entirely on the pursuits of a man trying to get laid."
The SRB (Sonic Rapid Board). It's awesome. [link]
“Evidently I am insane. May I go now?”
-Ax, from Animorphs
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Silly was better, much better. You pull it off really well XD The sign language was perfect, out of the blue.

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~When in doubt, live life to the fullest....but with caution; there's no telling what may happen.
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Thank you! Glad you liked it.

And it is out of the blue, but this character has been in my head for a while now.

--
"Johnny Bravo...The only kids cartoon focusing entirely on the pursuits of a man trying to get laid."
The SRB (Sonic Rapid Board). It's awesome. [link]
“Evidently I am insane. May I go now?”
-Ax, from Animorphs

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